高三英语二轮复习读后续写之母女吵架课件.pptx

碗面暖瞬心，母爱深无尽;续写方法：十句五定法（固定：P1P2首句+P1尾句+P2尾两句）

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①接着Para1（心理/动作）（主语：所有人物；若给定句是动作那么①就心理）

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⑤根据Para2给定句

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⑥接着Para2（心理/动作）（主语：所有人物；若给定句是动作那么①就心理）

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⑨结局（问题解决）符合价值观！

⑩升华价值观/感叹

?;⑨结局（问题解决）符合价值观！

??个人成长：克服困境，实现个人成功

??家庭温情：解决问题，缓解矛盾，拥抱亲人

??社会温情：解决问题，感谢陌生人的帮助并成为朋友

??人与自然：人与动物和谐相处

⑩升华价值观/感叹

??个人成长：不断成长，感悟人生真理

??家庭温情：感悟家人重要性，升华传统美德

??社会温情：感悟困境中陌生人的无私帮助，人间自有真情在

??人与自然：人与动物和谐相处，共筑人类生存环境;Bellawastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpweepingwhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.Havingwanderedinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shesighedandhadtoleave.

??Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes…butIdon’thavemoneyonme,”shereplied.“That’snothing.I’lltreatyoutoday,”saidtheman.“Comein.”

??Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,whosesmellwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,Jennycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.“Nothing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidJenny.“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomercilesscomparedtoastranger!”

??Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”

?Bellasatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;

?SherememberedMother’sfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful,butIhaveneverthankedmymumfor