外研版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 Module 5 写作能力提升练 (3).pptVIP

**写作实践实战演练Module5Lookafteryourself写作能力提升练作为一名中学生，你是如何保持健康的呢？某报刊英文专栏以“HowtoKeepFit”为题向中学生开展征文活动。请你用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈你的看法。提示:1.说明健康的重要性；2.提出保持健康的建议，可以从“日常饮食”“体育锻炼”“睡眠情况”等方面入手。［审题指导］1.体裁:说明文2.人称:以第一、二人称为主3.时态:一般现在时［思路构建］HowtoKeepFitHealthismuchmoreimportantthanwealth.It’simportantforustokeepfitallourlives.Wecan’tstudyorworkwellwithoutahealthybody.Therearemanywaystokeephealthy.First,youcaneatmorefreshfruitandvegetables.Andyou’dbetterdrinkmorewarmwater.［精彩范文］Next,youhavetodolotsofexercise,suchasrunning,walkingandsoon.Andfinallyweshouldhavegoodlivinghabits.Weshouldhaveatleast8hours’sleepanightandhaveabalanceddiet.Thereisafamoussaying,“Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.”Ifyoucareaboutyourself,it’seasytohaveahealthylifestyle.1.采用“总—分—总”结构，思路清晰。2.连接词“first,next,finally”的使用，使文章逻辑性强。3.亮点词汇keepfit,suchas,atleast等为文章添彩。4.高分句型：①It’simportantforustokeepfitallourlives.（it作形式主语，避免句子头重脚轻）②Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.（谚语的正确使用为文章加分）高分点评：假如你是某国际中学健康俱乐部的成员，为了帮助同学们树立健康饮食的正确观念，你打算在多媒体教室做一个题为“Healthydiet”的英文报告。请你结合以下提示草拟英文报告，并号召大家坚持体育锻炼，养成良好的生活习惯。要求:词数不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HealthydietHello,everyone!Today’ssubjectisabouthealthydiet.Nowadays,moreandmoreteenagersbecomefatandunhealthy.Why?Becausethere’ssomethingw