英语Unit2OnwardsandupwardsPeriod5素养课件外研版.pptVIP

Unit2OnwardsandupwardsPeriod5Developingideas(Ⅱ)写作培优课写作素养提升写一次个人经历(Writingaboutanexperience)【写作指导】话题阐释描写个人经历是对“个人生活与社会生活〞话题的考查,是高考常考话题,主要涉及记叙文、应用文。此类应用文主要包括日志、书信、演讲稿等。文体概述描述个人经历是记叙文的一种,要写清楚经历事件的六要素,即五个W和一个H:What,When,Where,Who,Why,How。一般以第一或第三人称表达,常用一般过去时。框架构建1.经历的起始:When,Where,WhyandWhoLastsummerholiday,I_______.Itwasvery_______.Iwentto_______with_______.Hetaughtme_______.?2.经历的经过:WhatandHowAtfirst,Iwasafraidof_______.AndI_______inthewater.ButFathersaid_______andhewould_______.ThenIbeganto_______,butIcouldn’t_______.Itmademeupset.ThenFathertoldme_______,howto_______.Slowly,Icould_______.?3.经历的结局和影响:EndingandEffectInfact,itwas_______.Ilearnedit_______.Iwasexcitedwhen_______.?【典题例如】还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?某英文报纸正在以“Anunforgettableexperience〞为题进行征文活动。请你写一篇100词左右的英语短文,描述一次难忘的经历,并谈谈你的感想。Step1谋篇立意体裁:记叙文话题:个人经历时态:一般过去时人称:第一人称Tips事件、导入事件过程个人感想Step2语言支架1.上学期我的腿在一场足球比赛中受了重伤,我不得不卧床休息两周。①Lasttermmylegwasbadlyhurtinafootballmatch.②Ihadtostayinbedfortwoweeks.③用and合并为一句:_______________________________________________________________________________?Lasttermmylegwasbadlyhurtinafootballmatch,andIhadtostayinbedfortwoweeks.2.当我在家担忧功课的时候,我的同学汤姆来帮助。①Iwasworriedaboutschoolworkathome.②MyclassmateTomcametohelp.③用含有while引导的时间状语从句合并为一句:______________________________________________________________________WhileIwasworriedaboutschoolworkathome,myclassmateTomcametohelp.?3.他告诉了我老师在课堂上教的东西,帮我解决了很多数学问题。①Theteachertaughtinclass.②Hehelpedmealotwithmymathproblems.③用what引导的宾语从句合并为一句:____________________________________________________________________________?Hetoldmewhattheteachertaughtinclass,andhelpedmealotwithmymathproblems.4.我深受感动,因为他一直教我,直到我回到学校。①Iwasdeeplymoved.②Hekeptteachingme.③Ireturnedtoschool.④用because和until引导的状语从句将①②③句合