高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练14.pptxVIP

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练14片段描写:环境烘托动作衔接心理描写情节转折

1.高分句式：With+环境特征（名词+doing/done）,主语+动作（场景融合）2.高分句式：Themoment+时间触发,感官细节（视觉/听觉/嗅觉）+主角反应3.高分句式：Under+特定场景（地点/天气）,环境动态+主角状态环境烘托

sceneone___________________________________________________andstreetlightsturningononebyone,Grandmasatonthewickerchairintheyard,flippingthroughtheoldphotoalbumslowly.With+环境特征（名词+doing/done）,主语+动作（场景融合）Withduskspreadingoverthetown’srooftops暮色漫过小镇的屋顶，路灯一盏盏亮起，奶奶坐在院子里的藤椅上，慢慢翻着旧相册。环境烘托

scenetwo____________________________________________,afamiliarbicyclebellranginthedistance,andthegirlimmediatelystoodonhertoestolooktowardstheintersection.Themoment+时间触发,感官细节（视觉/听觉/嗅觉）+主角反应第一滴雨落在伞面的瞬间，远处传来熟悉的自行车铃声，女孩立刻踮起脚向路口望去。Themomentthefirstraindrophittheumbrella环境烘托

scenethree_____________________________________,footprintsonthestreetweresooncovered.Theboywrappedhisdownjackettightlyandtrottedtowardsthebusstopsign.Under+特定场景（地点/天气）,环境动态+主角状态漫天飞雪的笼罩下，街道上的脚印很快被覆盖，男孩裹紧羽绒服，朝着公交站牌小跑过去。Underthecoverofheavysnowfall环境烘托

段落一ItwasaquietFridayevening,andGrandmahadbeenwaitingforhergrandsontocomebackfromschool.Shepreparedhisfavoriteosmanthuscakeandplaceditonthestonetableintheyard,thenwentbackintothehousetofetchtheoldphotoalbumshekeptinthedrawer.(1)_______________________________________(暮色漫过小镇的屋顶).andstreetlightsturningononebyone,Grandmasatonthewickerchairintheyard,flippingthroughtheoldphotoalbumslowly.(2)_____________________________(每一页都装着孙子的童年回忆).—hisfirstdayofprimaryschool,hisbirthdayparties,andthetimetheyplantedasmallosmanthustreetogether.(3)__________________________________(她翻到一张两人在桂花树下拥抱的照片时).,sheheardasoftGrandmafromthegate,andabigsmileappearedonherface.practice…Withduskspreadingoverthetown’srooftopsEachpageheldmemoriesofhergrandson’schildhoodAssheturnedtoaphotoofthemhuggingunderthe