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专题04应用文作文

（一）

（2025·安徽蚌埠市·一模）

66.假定你是李华，写信给你的英国笔友Tom，向他介绍上周学校组织的当地古建筑保护活动。内容包括：

1.活动过程;

2.你感受。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearTom,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanactivityabouttheprotectionoflocalancientarchitecturethatourschoolorganizedlastweek.

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Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearTom,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanactivityabouttheprotectionoflocalancientarchitecturethatourschoolorganizedlastweek.

Wevisitedseveralancientbuildingsinourcity,learningabouttheirhistoricalsignificance.Wealsohelpedcleanupthesurroundingsandpaintedsomeofthefadeddecorations.Thehighlightwasalecturebyalocalhistorianwhoexplainedtheimportanceofpreservingtheseculturaltreasures.

Iwasdeeplyimpressedbythebeautyandhistoryofthesebuildings.Itmademerealizehowimportantitistoprotectourculturalheritage.Ifeltproudtobepartofthismeaningfulactivityandhopetodomoreinthefuture.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写一封邮件，介绍上周学校组织的当地古建筑保护活动，内容包括活动过程和自己的感受。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

古建筑：ancientarchitecture→ancientbuildings

保护：protect→preserve

感动：impressed→touched

美感：beauty→aestheticvalue

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Wevisitedseveralancientbuildingsinourcityandlearnedabouttheirhistoricalsignificance.

拓展句：Wevisitedseveralancientbuildingsinourcity,wherewelearnedabouttheirhistoricalsignificance.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Wevisitedseveralancientbuildingsinourcity,wherewelearnedabouttheirhistoricalsignificance.（运