成都七中育才学校2012-2013学年度期中考试英语作文真题解析Alex.doc

成都七中育才学校2012——2013学年度上期九年级英语 期中考试作文解析 【真题再现】 13年来，国庆“黄金周”已经成为我们生活的一部分，但对此有人赞成也有人反对，以下是他们的观点，请根据提示及表格写一篇文章，并谈谈你自己的看法以及原因（各两个）。 赞成 反对 有利于经济的发展 与家人、朋友团聚 去自己喜欢的地方旅游 得到充分的放松和休息 公交事故增多 人多车多，很拥挤 花费大 环境破坏严重 提示词： economic 经济的 National Day Golden Week国庆“黄金周” 要求： 有恰当的开头、过渡和结尾。 表达完整、书写规范、卷面整洁。 字数80-100词左右。 【解析】 审题：国庆黄金周的利与弊，观点交锋，结合自己的感受，谈谈自己的看法，各两条。本文的体裁是议论文，注意议论文的格式。 写作思路——三段作文法： 第一段，开门见山，介绍背景，引出问题，提出观点。 第二段，正反对比论证。 第三段，得出结论，提出见解。 【Alex老师三段式作文范文】 The National Day Golden Week has long been a part of our life since 13years ago. And now it is still in peoples focus and has a far-reaching influence on peoples life. As for the golden week, opinions vary (换成differ也可) from person to person. Some people are for it while others are against it and they all have their reasons to support their ideas. People who are in favor of the golden week hold that it has so many advantages that we should hold on to it. In their eyes, the golden week, in the first place, has been contributing a lot to the economic growth. Besides, it offers them a good opportunity to get together with their family and friends, making them feel relaxed and tightening their relations to both their family and friends. Moreover, they can go sightseeing wherever they like. In addition, they can find enough time to relax themselves in the golden week.On the contrary, those who are against the golden week object that the golden week causes so many problems. Above all, crowds of people flood(涌出，洪水般流动) out of the cities to enjoy their holiday in the suburbs during the golden week and bring out heavy traffic and the city finds so many cars on the streets that it is hard to move around. What is worse, traffic accidents are on the increase because of the heavy traffic. Besides, people are spending much more money on holiday activities than is actually needed. Last but not least, environmental problems loom (换成become也可以) serious during the golden week, and pollution during the week is more serious than usual. Every coin has tw