2012届高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评二课件（开放式作文）.pptVIP

* 请根据下图提示，用英语写一篇短文。先简要描写下图，然后再发表你自己的看法和意见。 注意：1.词数：150左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 讲评 本篇开放作文的写作的关键在于对漫画主题的正确理解。 正确的理解是：提醒人们在照顾孩子的同时也应该关爱老人。孩子，中年人，老人都有各得其乐的方式，应该珍惜每一个阶段。 不恰当的理解或是跑题： ①画面描绘了母爱，老人深受感动，养狗也体现了一种母爱。 ②低碳生活：因为小孩骑车（没开车），而且画面里有风车。 ③少壮不努力，老大图悲伤：年少时学的少（ 要多学，老了之后就不能学了），年老时就悲伤。 ④母亲教孩子学车，所以母亲溺爱。 ⑤有人想要孩子，有人想养宠物，但最终宠物代替不，所以还是应该抚养孩子好。 ⑥去户外锻炼身体，多接触大自然。 漫画所反映的事情发生的背景是在一个公园内。一位年轻的母亲帮助女儿学骑自行车；一位老人坐在板凳上，旁边有一条睡着的宠物狗。 ①In the picture there is an old man sitting alone on the bench in a park. He is looking at a young mother holding the bike for her little daughter while she is riding it. By the side of the old man lies a sleeping little pet dog. ②As is shown in the picture, an old man with a stick seated alone on the bench in a park. He is looking at a young mother helping her little daughter learn how to ride a bike. Beside him lies a sleeping little pet dog, which is his only company. ③As is shown in the picture, there is an old man with a stick sitting alone on the bench in a park. On the road in front of him a young mother is holding the bike for her little daughter while she is riding it. By the side of the old man lies a sleeping little pet dog, which is his only company. ④In this lively picture, the mom is helping with the little girl learning to ride a bicycle, while an old person with his little pet dog sleeping, sitting on a chair, is showing jealous impressions to the vivid life style of the mother and daughter. ⑤As is seen in the picture, a young mother is riding a bike together with her daughter in a park, smiling happily, happily, while on one side of the road sits a lonely old man with only a dog by him, looking upset. 本幅漫画采用了明显的对比手法：小孩由母亲陪着玩，很快乐；老人只能独自一人，只有宠物狗相伴，给人以一种强烈的视觉反差。我们由此可以得出结论：老人无人陪伴，他应该感到很孤独（这可以从老人的面部表情中看出来）。 ①This is a picture of great contrast. By the look on the man’s face, we can tell the old man feels a bit lonely. However, the little girl, enjoying her mother’s company, is playing happily. ②The picture gives us a strong visual con