基础写作记叙文.ppt

基础写作—记叙文 1.记叙文写作要求,注意事项 2. 记叙文写作步骤 3. 相应练习,提高写作 1.记叙文写作要求,注意事项 记叙文:写人,记事为主. 注意:交代清楚事件发生的时间,地点,任务,事件,原因及其结果. 不要按照汉语意思进行直译. 正确运用时态,多为过去时. 对所给提示进行整合,不要硬译. 严格控制句子数量,保证5句话. 应擅用语法,词法,句法,巧用连接词,润色文章. 抛砖引玉:刻舟求剑 楚国有个人坐船渡江时,不小心把自己的一把宝剑掉落江中.他马上掏出一把小刀,在宝剑落水的船舷上作了一个记号.船靠岸后,那楚人立即从船上刻记号的地方跳下去捞取掉落的宝剑.他怎么找得到宝剑呢?船继续行驶,而宝剑却不会再移动.像他这样去找剑,真是太愚蠢可笑了. 写作要求:请按内容要求写这个故事,要写标题. 必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条翻译成英语. 2.写作步骤: 审题:文体,时态,人称 谋篇:整合信息要点 坐船/丢剑—作记号—靠岸/寻剑—未寻—评价 3. 行文:翻译成5句话,巧用连词,连句成篇. 4. 润色: 4.1内容完整,精练,表达准确清晰 4.2全文灵活正确使用复合句,非谓语结构. 4.3句子结构使用连词,副词等连接上下文. 范文: Making His Mark A man from the state of Chu was taking a boat across a river when he dropped his sword into the water carelessly. Immediately he made a mark on the side of the boat where the sword dropped, hoping to find it later. When the boat stopped moving, he went into the water to search for his sword at the place where he had marked the boat. As we know, the boat had moved but the sword had not. Isn’t this a very foolish way to look for a sword? 范文欣赏: Making His Mark A man from the state of Chu was taking a boat across a river when he dropped his sword into the water carelessly. Immediately he made a mark on the side of the boat where the sword dropped, hoping to findit later. When the boat stopped moving, he went into the water to search for his sword at the place where he hadmarked the boat. As we know, the boat had moved but the sword had not. Isn’t this a very foolish way to look for a sword? 举一反三 开头: Yesterday morning, I was surprised to hear that my friend Lihua had been hit by a car and had been taken to hospital… 复习写作步骤: 审题:文体,时态,人称 谋篇:整合信息要点 行文:翻译成5句话,巧用连词,连句成篇. 润色: 4.1内容完整,精练,表达准确清晰 4.2全文灵活正确使用复合句,非谓语结构. 4.3句子结构使用连词,副词等连接上下文. 举一反三 Reference version: A Traffic Accident Yesterday morning, I was surprised to hear that my friend Li Hua had been hit by a car and was in hospital now. The other day he was going to cross a street very cautiously and did not go until he saw th