日记作文.ppt

Writing What topics have we learnt to write about? Introduce ourselves Talk about our school and friends Our favourite food, pets, shops, clothes and festivals Our school life and our trouble Plan a day out Our abilities The world around us： Our home and neighbourhood The place(town) we live in How to get to a place wild animals(endangered animals) Join a Bird-watching Club Natural disasters Charity activities and charity organizations What kinds of letters have ever appeared in our text books? Invitation letter (7B Unit 3) Thank-you letter (7B Unit 4) Recommendation letter (7B Unit 5, 9A Unit 1) Application letter (8A Unit 5) Ask-for-help letter (9A Unit 3) Complaint letter (9B Unit 2) Do you know the most useful sentences in each kind of letters? Discuss: 写作要领 1 细读提示——明白写什么，日记、信函、报导或叙事描写 2 写全要点——了解核心内容，非重要情节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。表格类原则上一个不能少 3 卷面干净——事先打草稿然后誊改是使文章通畅的关键 4 书写认真——不求文字隽秀力保规范工整，这是留下好印象的起码条件 5 层次分明——为使短文令人感到赏心悦目分成2甚至3段为好 6 承上启下——简而言之是连接词、过渡句他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带 7 繁简有度——文章总有详写与略写，尤其是 图画类短文，学会筛选是非常必要的，如其不然，事无巨细全部点到，不仅使文章成了流水帐，而且空耗了时间还使文章显得冗赘若再因超长而被扣分岂不得不偿失？！ 8 亮点突出——较高级词汇和较 复杂的语法结构的合理适时使用，这最能影响或打动改卷教师，是求得高档次及该档次高端分 值的保证 Visiting the World Hort-Expo Garden on July9, 1999,I went to Kunming by car to pay a visit to the World Hort-Expo Garden.Kunming is a beautiful city,and I thought the Expo Garden must be more beautiful. I thought was true.The Expo Garden showed us the best plants of the world.We could see flowers and trees everywhere.Some of them were standing in rows or in circles.If you stand at a distance,you would find that the Garden was just like a picture! The flowers looked lovelier in the sunshine.sit near them,I felt I was in the sea of flowers.I was as happy as a bird,flying over the sea There are many foreigners from different parts of the world.They spoke different languages.And I could. Hardly understand what they said.But it did not matter. They were very friendly to us,and they often had warm smile on their faces. I stayed