基础写作公开课.pptVIP

1. Read the topic, and then organize the messages in 5 sentences; (审题,对所给的信息点合并或拆分成5句话); 1、最近，网络上一款叫“开心农场”的虚拟游戏风靡全国，玩家涉及到了各个年龄层次。 Recently, a virtual game called Happy farm is popular with players of all ages throughtout the whole nation on the Internet. 2、玩家在“开心农场”不仅可以“种植”蔬菜、鲜花、水果，还可以替好友浇水除草除虫。 Not only can players plant vegetables, flowers and fruits, but they can help their friends water, weed or worm the plants on Happy farm. 3、在经营农场的同时，玩家可以感受“作物收成”带来的乐趣, 减轻现实生活中的压力。 Players can taste the interest of harvest and reduce pressure in real life while running their farm. 5、很多玩家都沉溺其中，严重影响其身体健康和正常的生活。 Many players are addicted to it, which badly affects their health and normal life. 4. 让玩家感到最刺激的是“窃取”他人农产品却不会受到惩罚。 What makes players most excited is that they can steal others farm produces without being punished. Recently, a virtual game called Happy farm is popular with players of all ages throughtout the whole nation on the Internet. Not only can players plant vegetables, flowers and fruits, but they can help their friends water, weed or worm the plants on Happy farm. In addition, players can taste the interest of harvest and reduce pressure in real life while running their farm.What makes players most excited is that they can steal others farm produces without being punished. However, many players are addicted to it, which badly affects their health and normal life. 2. Use more advanced words and expressions, and different sentence patterns to embellish the sentences; 3. Add some conjunctions if needed. How to write a good basic writing Summary 基础写作 简介上海世博会：2010年世界博览会 (Expo 2010)正在中国上海市举行，这是 首次由中国举办的世界博览会。上海世博会 的主题是“城市，让生活更美好” (Better City, Better Life)。 基本情况 在上海举办，从5月1日开始到10月31日结束，历时6个月。 主题 “城市，让生活更美好”，勾画出未来城市与和谐的都市生活的蓝图 吉祥物 “海宝”，蓝色，寓意“大海之宝”。还代表着地球、梦想、海洋、生命、未来、科技 其它 你对2010世博会的看法 Homework： 基础写作 [写作内容]： 请根据以下表格要点对上海世博会进行介绍。 * * * * * * * * * * Basic Writing polishment 高考基础写作中句子的润色 Basic Writing Learning Goals 1. Know about the requirements of basic writing;