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高分作文要领 作文审题 * * 1.开头要出彩 结尾要自然 2.分段使层次更清楚 关联词让行文更流畅 3.写正确的词汇，句子 4.写高级的词汇，句子 5.书写要漂亮，卷面要干净 审题 列要点 依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句. 构篇章,扩句成文. 检查润色 书写 基础写作解题步骤： 审题材 审人称 审时态 清要点 假如你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习 中文两年,即将回国。现在由你给她发一封e-mail，邀请 她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下： 1祝贺她顺利通过考试,她的学习进步很大,为她骄傲； 2.感谢她帮助你们学习英语； 3.时间:星期六晚上六点； 4.地点:阳光俱乐部(the Sun Club)302房间； 5.路线:在校门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达 注意:1.短文必须包括以上内容,可以适当增加细节。 2.词数:100左右 (开头已经给出,不计入词数) 参考词汇:欢送会: farewell party Dear Jane, ________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Li Hua 要点 祝贺,通过考试,学习进步很大,骄傲 感谢,帮助学习英语 举办欢送会,星期六晚上六点， the Sun Club,302房间 校门口,乘坐332路公汽 在中国学习两年中文 佳句欣赏: Having studied together for two years, I find You are a hard-working student. (付林) I think I will the days we spent together. …,because it is with your help that I could Learn English well. But for your help, I think I wouldn’t have had a good command of English.(刘梦月) I am pleased that you have passed the exam. What amazes us is that we are interested in English now.(曹咪) Depending on you, we had our English level raised. (李晶) You can take the 332 bus at school gate to get the Sun Club directly, where the party will be held in room 302. (方亚) It is at 6:00 am, Saturday that we will hold the farewell party in Room 302,the Sun Club. (周昌莲) All of us feel proud of the great progress you have made. (黄书颖) It’s very kind of you to help me, I can’t thank you too much. (秦丹丹) Hearing the news that you will go to your motherland, we… (向晨) When knowing you will come back to your Homeland, we are so sorry. (黄玉婉) We’ll never forget the days when we gathered together to work out some problems. (代杰) It is because of your help that our grades have been improved a lot. (毛亚莉) What excites us most is your great improvement in studying. (吴婕) Not only have you taught us much about American culture, but also you have helped us study English bet