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专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 极智批改网 Smartpigai 批改范文 写作原题2 考生原文3 批改过程6 总评分数8 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 本范文为粗批版，登陆极智批改网，享受最专业的外教批改服务 专属外教团队依据考试官方指南提供专业作文批改和口语批改服务 破解官方指南，还原打分标准。专业批改·极速提分·极智批改网 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 写作原题 Doeseveryachievementbringwithitnewchallenges? 本范文为粗批版，登陆极智批改网，享受最专业的外教批改服务 专属外教团队依据考试官方指南提供专业作文批改和口语批改服务 破解官方指南，还原打分标准。专业批改·极速提分·极智批改网 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 考生原文 There is an old saying in China --something negative always follows something beneficial, which indicates the truth that advantages and disadvantatges are always coexisted,and once an achievement is made, it brings with new problems. In this essay, Ill illustratethepointbygivingexamplesofnuclearenergy,Internetand the Great Depression. The nuclear energy was made from theory into reality last century .Nevertheless, people were so forcing to its unbelievable ability that they neglected a significant question which would bring the new achievement from heaven to hell, how to control it. The heating-core nuclear reaction is too wild to be controled by humans. So far, the reaction can only be used as violent weapons: H-bomb, eachofwhichcan easilydestroyahugecitywithapopulationofmore than a million. Now, how to use the nuclear energy safely and efficientlyhasbecomeoneofthemostdifficultchallengesfacedbyall the human beings. Nuclearenergymayinfluenceourlivesslightly,butthethingIam going to talk about next is quietclose to our lives -- the Internet. Up to now, more than half of a billion Chinese people has joined the Internet. People find i