A Possible Writing Process.ppt

* A Possible Writing Process Score:______ There’s love around me. At home, my mother cook meals for?me,?wash?clouthes?,?clean?the house and?make?our?home?more??beatiful.?When I come ?into my?home,?I?can?feel?love. ??????At? school,?my?classmates?often?help?me?and?we? play?together?. My?teacher?teach us knowledges and?talk?with?us. When?I?am?at?school,?I?can?feel?love. ???????I?think?I?should?give them?love?too. ???????So, Ill?help?my?mum?to?do?some?housework. I?will?work?hard and?help?others?in?class. 12-13 08中考作文： “Love around me.” (1) Is there any love around you? (2) How do you feel when you get it? (3) What are you going to do to show your love? Pre-writing (outlining) While-writing (editing) Post-writing (revising) Brainstorming Making lists Asking yourself wh-s Grammar Joints Proverbs Logical order Modifying Love happiness helping hand care about take care of warm friendship Back Asking yourself questions: Who Where When Why What How 08中考题：“Love around me.” (1) Is there any love around you? (2) How do you feel when you get it? (3) What are you going to do to show your love? Who--- When--- Who often gives you love? Who do you often get love from? When do they give love to you? Asking yourself questions: Who Where When Why What How 08中考题： “Love around me.” （3）When do they give love to you? （2）Who do you often get love from? （1） Is there any love around you? （5）What are you going to do to show your love? （4）How do you feel when you get it? Back give me a helping hand get a warm greeting care for… encourage… be proud of… What all the time be in difficulty make progress Parents teachers meet problems in study every morning Friends When Who Back Besides, In addition, What’s more But, However, after all, though In short, In brief, In general As a result, So, Therefore 时间： 目的: 递进： 并列： 转折: 因果： 列举： 总结： when, while, after, before in order to, so that and, as well as, or,