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2. Types of sentences 1. Simple sentence: I enjoy playing tennis and look forward to it every week. (2 predicate verbs) My friends and I play tennis and go bowling every weekend. (2 subject noun or proun, and 2 predicate verbs ) 2. Compound sentence: I enjoy playing tennis, but I hate playing golf. I enjoy playing tennis; I hate playing golf. 3. Complex sentence: Although I enjoy playing tennis, I hate golf Whether we go or not has not been decided. 4. Compound-complex sentence: I hate playing golf, but I enjoy playing tennis even though I am not very good at it. 并列句连接词(Coordinators) 从属连接词(subordinators) (5) 过多使用并列句 Eugene O’Neill was an American playwright, and he had an unhappy childhood, and he told the story of his childhood in a play entitled A Long Day’s Journey Into Night and he said it was written in tears. Revised: Eugene O’Neill, an American playwright, told the story of his unhappy childhood in a play entitled A Long Day’s Journey Into Night, which he said was written in tears and blood. （6）过多使用从句 He is a man who is honest, who always pays his just debts, and who observes the golden rules in his dealings with others. Revised: He is an honest man who always pays his just debts and observes the golden rules in his dealings with others. 练习 5 使用学过的方法改写下列段落 Whether college graduates are helped to find employment quickly by the revised programs is not clear. But the programs have raised a lot of criticism after fifteen or twenty years of experimentation. Some of the criticism comes from the graduates themselves. The graduates find that their practical knowledge is neither deep nor flexible. They find that they need management training and more study in their own field. They find that when they progress to higher position. Also, they feel handicapped by their lack of general knowledge. They are ignorant of the language and culture of the foreigners. They have to do business with them. They are unable to use English easily and properly. They really suffer