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运用变译方法中摘译、编译、译述、缩译、综述、述评、译评、译写、改译、阐译、参议、仿作结束翻译事实 摘译 摘译，顾名思义，指先摘后译的变译方法。 例： Blame beer gut on genes A beer-gut gene that gives fellas flabby tummies has been discovered by scientists. The medical breakthrough proves that guzzling ale is not the only reason why men develop saggy stomachs. They can also inherit from their parents a body make-up much more likely to run to fat. The beer-gut gene was tracked down by Italian experts. They found that men with a particular variant of it called DD were twice as likely to get fat. And they are also significantly more likely to put on the pounds around their midriff. Dr. Carol Copper said : “This sounds like a New Year’s gift for all those guys who are tubby round the middle but aren’t ready to give up the trips to the boozer. You’re stuck with the genes you’re born with, which could by just the excuse lardy lads who like a drink are looking for.” Dr. Pasquale Strazzullo warned the findings might not apply to British men-because the research was based entirely on Italians. 意大利科学家发现，体内携带一种被称做DD的啤酒肚基因变体的男子发胖的几率是常人的两倍。 上文是一则科技新闻报道。科学家最新发现，男子啤酒肚的产生源于体内一种叫做DD的特殊基因变体。段中第5句正是这一科学新发现的核心内，因此将其作为摘译对象。这是单句摘译。要注意的是，原句中代词they, it指代不清，摘译时要还原为其所指代的具体对象。 编译 编译，指对原作加工整理然后翻译的变译方法。 例：She found herself minus the leg one week after consulting for a doctor about a persistent swelling she attributed to hard work and play in New York City – it was an inoperable bone tumor. While it saved her life, an ensuing year of chemotherapy reduced the once stunning model to a bald shadow of her former self. 原译：在询问医生为什么持续肿胀一个星期之后，她失去了一条腿。她曾认为是由于工作劳累和在纽约市游玩造成的。这是一个不宜手术的骨瘤。虽然手术挽救了她的生命，但接踵而来的长达一年的化疗使这位一度艳丽销魂的时装模特儿秀发脱落，枯瘦如柴，失尽昔日风采。 改译：她腿上出现了一个持续不消的肿块，原以为是在纽约又工作又游玩累的，看医生之后才知道是骨瘤，而且不宜手术。一周之后她便截去了那条腿。截肢虽然挽救了她的生命，但接踵而来的长达一年的化疗使这位一度艳丽消魂的时装模特儿秀发脱落，枯瘦如柴，失尽昔日风采。 译文理解准确，表达流畅，但有一个问题，就是照搬原作的内在逻辑结构，使汉语读者对所述事件的因果关系难以把握。滋生许多疑问。李运兴说，“这位译者没有注意到汉语更重自然时序的临摹性强的特点，致使译文多处发生连贯失调。比如，‘失去一条腿’的原因是什么?既然‘不宜手术’，怎么’手术挽救了她的生命’?”。因此，译者必须对原文句序进行调整，以符合汉语自然时序的思维逻辑。 译述 译述