“我最喜欢运动员是刘翔”作文讲评.pptVIP

作文评讲 优秀习作： 王 磊 鄢伟先 张 焱 罗蕊丽 张 一 钟 涛 王丽莎 李 莉 张小林 张雅 Useful words and phrases test our will build up our body stay/keep healthy/fit build our character win a gold medal win the championship be a champion professional trainer win glory for It’s a great honour for sb. to do sth. with one’s help/support/permission under one’s guidance/instructions/ direction/leadership take a （great) fancy to Wonderful sentences 1.Strict as coaches were, I learned a lot from them and my skills are improving day by day. 2.What makes me proud is that I was ever a champion of 100 meters’ race in my town. 3.There was a time when I won the first prize in the 100-meter race in my county Beautify these sentences 1.No matter how large challenge I will meet, I’ll never stop myself from following my dream. 2.Some people expressed concerned about if he can do well in his future matches. 3. I hope to become a athlete as successful as Liuxiang. Fortunately, I ever won the champion. That made me feel good about myself and made me become more interested in it. 他山之石 1.I know there will be many difficulties on the way to success, but the pains I will experience are nothing compared to what those great athletes have experienced. 2.I think everyone has the capacity for their dream. 3.I think sunshine is to plants what track and field is to me. 4. My love for it grew stronger and stronger , it is like a seed buried in my body and it grows up with time passing by. 5. I will train hard and catch every chance to improve my running skills. 6.I believe he will create another miracle for Asia. 7.I believe all this unhappiness is just for the moment and that all his fans will be in favor of him as usual and forever. 8.I gradually realized it was as much an art as a sport … 19.No one can replace him in my heart. 10.I believe if I work hard enough, there is no obstacle too great to overcome .. 11.Once you think of giving up, you will never achieve your dream. 12.Althou