【创新设计】2015-2016学年高二英语外研版选修六课堂讲义配套课件：Module 6 Period Three Reading Practice Cultural Corner .pptVIP

【写作分析】 第一步：认真审题 1．影评要包括故事的背景(setting)，故事情节(plot)，人物角色(characters)以及最后发表一下自己的观点(opinion)。阐述看法要突出中心。一篇评论可以从多方面进行评论，但中心观点只有一个。写影评的时候要防止只是复述情节内容，介绍故事梗概；要写出自己的看法，具体问题具体分析，不要泛泛而谈。在写法上要注意两点：一是点面结合；二是观点和材料要统一。 2．这是一则电影评论。鉴于其体裁要求，时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称。 3．客观反映要点，体现控制性写作要求，但不要单纯地翻译要点。叙述和评论相结合，注意过渡的自然，语言的连贯。适当运用高级词汇和复杂结构以提高文章的表述层次，增加得分亮点。注意语言表述的准确性，使用恰当、贴切的词汇。 第二步：提炼要点 1．a real blockbuster 2．the most famous directors 3．an action film 4．many famous actors 5．performance 6．take place 7．fight with 8．happiness and freedom 9．unforgettable experiences 第三步：扩点成句 1．Its a real blockbuster whose name is Seven Swords. 2．Seven Swords is the production of Xu Ke，who is one of the most famous directors in Hong Kong. 3．Its an action film.Also we can call it a historical film.There are many famous actors in the film，such as Zhen Zidan，Li Ming，Yang Caini and so on. 4．I think their performances are pretty good and wonderful. 5．The story took place in the northwest of China in the 17th century.It tells us that many heroes fought with the government army for the peoples happiness and freedom，and at last they won. 6．I think this film is very good.Its one of my unforgettable experiences. 【参考范文】 Seven Swords Last Sunday evening，we saw a film in our school. Its a real blockbuster whose name is Seven Swords. Seven Swords is the production of Xu Ke，who is one of the most famous directors in Hong Kong.Its an action film.Also we can call it a historical film.There are many famous actors in the film，such as Zhen Zidan，Li Ming，Yang Caini and so on.I think their performances are pretty good and wonderful.The story took place in the northwest of China in the 17th century.It tells us that many heroes fought with the government army for the peoples happiness and freedom，and at last they won. I think this film is very good.Its one of my unforgettable experiences. 【亮点展示】 (1)定语从句whose name is Seven Swords的使用使语言简洁、准确。 (2)such as，so on的使用使评论自然、流畅，避免了该类体裁语言的生硬。 (3)文中并列句的使用提高了语言的表述层次，增加了评论的文采。 (4)结尾自然、流畅，全文浑然一体。 【写作模板】