2016届海南省琼中中学高三英语二轮复习---高三下第七次综合考试作文讲评.pptVIP

考生作文 作文讲评训练 假如你叫李华。来自美国的同班同学Tom生病了，在家复习迎考。以下是学校关于英语期末考试的通知，请根据该通知写一份100字左右的e-mail给Tom，告诉他考试的情况。 注意： 1．开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2．生词：research work, grade。 时间：下周五——the last day of the exam week 内容：五个问题中任意回答单个；作文一篇 复习范围：课本和笔记 计分：期末考试占50%，其中考试占30%，研究性课程占20% 相关词汇短语 词汇短语：next Friday, answer the question, article/passage/composition, textbook, note, go over, final exam, mid-exam, research work, consist of/be made up of/make up, grade/mark, recover, … 句式要点：通知传达尽量简洁明了。 高级表达：定语从句，状语从句，非谓语动词作状语或定语，…… 月考作文得分情况分析(Class 1) 最高分 最低分 平均分 18 0 9.8 16~20分:6人 11~15分:18人 6~10分:12人 1~5分:11人 0分: 1人 失分原因： 1. 词汇量不足，句子结构不正确，导致大部分定位在三档以下作文； 2. 作为通知转告铺垫太多，文章显得凌乱啰嗦； 3. 缺少高级表达。 月考作文得分情况分析(Class 8) 最高分 最低分 平均分 16 0 6.4 16~20分: 1人 6~10分: 12人 11~15分: 12人 1~5分: 23人 0分: 1人 失分原因： 1. 词汇量不足，句子结构不正确，导致大部分定位在三档以下作文； 2. 作为通知转告铺垫太多，文章显得凌乱啰嗦； 3. 缺少高级表达。 Dear Tom, It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lessons with us. The English final exam will be held next Friday, which is also the last day of the exam week. What is different about the exam is that it consists of two parts, that is, answering three of the five questions and writing an article. We are supposed to go over our textbooks and class notes to prepare for it. The grade is made up of three parts. The final exam will make up 50% of our grade, the research work 20 and the mid-exam 30% of it. Please feel free to contact if you are still not clear about it. Hope you will recover soon and also get a satisfactory mark in the exam. Yours, Li Hua 句型仿写训练 1. 这个晚会最让我们惊讶的是它由两个部分组成，即歌唱比赛和游戏。(that is, 主语从句和表语从句) 2. 运动会将在12月25日举行，那天也是圣诞节。(定语从句) 1. What surprised us most is that it consisted of two parts, that is, singing contest and games. 2. The sport meeting will be held on December 25th, which is also the Christmas Day. Homework Recite the sample composition.