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句子无主语 在汉语中，无主语的句子被广泛使用，受此影响，作者在用英文撰写时也往往以动词开始。 汉语原文：首先回顾了光纤通信的历史，综述了光纤通信的发展现状，接着介绍了密集波分复用的若干使能技术最后对40Gb／s系统的若干关键技术进行了评述。 英语原文：Introduced status for optical fiber communication at first. Then described some enabling technologies of dense wavelength division multiplexing(DWDM). Finally commented some key technologies for 40Gb/s system. 修改后：This paper begins with an introduction to the current status of optical fiber communication, followed by a presentation of some enabling technologies of dense wavelength division multiplexing (DWDM) and concludes with a comment on some key technologies for the 40Gb/s system. 在英语语言中，直接以动词开头的句子在书面语中并不常见，因此，在摘要中可将这类句子翻译为被动语态“… is introduced/described/presented/dealt with…”或以“This paper introduces/describes/presents/deals with…”开头的主动语态。 时态使用错误 在汉语中“做了某事”表示动作已经发生，受此影响，中国作者常将“本文讨论了”翻译为过去时态。 汉语原文：以广泛应用的ARM7体系结构为移植目标，讨论了基于μC/OS-Ⅱ实时操作系统多任务处理能力的移植。介绍了μC/OS-Ⅱ系统和ARM7体系结构的主要特点,给出了移植条件及移植的实现过程,同时给出了多任务移植的实例。 英语原文：The paper used the fashionable ARM7 System for transplanting,and discussed the μC/OS-Ⅱ embeded system of multitasking transplant based on ARM7, It introduces prime characteristics ofμC/OS-Ⅱ system and ARM7 architecure and presents the prerequisite and realization process of transplant.the paper analyse an typical exemple in multitasking transplant,it will be a reference for μC/OS-Ⅱ transplant and long use. 修改后：This paper uses the widely applied ARM7 System for transplanting, and discusses the μC/OS-Ⅱ embedded system of multitasking transplant based on ARM7. It also introduces prime characteristics ofμC/OS-Ⅱ system and ARM7 architecture, presents the realization process of transplant and offers an example of multitasking transplant. 虽然在摘要中常出现“了”这一字，但因科技文章通常描述客观事实，故应用一般现在时态。 错误使用第一人称代词 英语原文：We consider an inverse heat conduction problem, the sideways heat equation. The problem is ill-posed, in the sense that the solution (if it exists) does not depend continuously on the data. A new kind of algorithm is proposed to regularize this problem