基于英语质量评价标准的写作教与评试题.ppt

* * 基于中职英语质量评价标准的职业英语写作教与评 Writing (2012 ) Place: hotel, pool People: names, boy, girl, man, woman, waiter Actions: eating, swimming, sitting… 1 3 2 1 1 1 标点和 大小写 （2分） 0 2 拼写和 语法结构 （2分） 0 0 连词的 使用 （3分） 1 1 1 信息 呈现 （3分） 具体评分标准 分值 项目 写作评分标准 全文至少有3句与图片相关的、完全正确的句子，全文至少35词 回答题目所问的问题一（句子） 回答题目所问的问题二（句子） 没有使用连词 用对两个连词（如同一个连词用对两次也可得2分） 用对至少两个不同的连词，且有三句或以上有连词的句子 标点符号错误≤2个 大小写错误≤2个 拼写和语法错误≤3（算前50个词，同一错误不重复扣分） 3＜拼写和语法错误≤5（算前50个词，同一错误不重复扣分） 拼写和语法错误＞5 （算前50个词，同一错误不重复扣分） 至少用对一个连词 文章字数≤20词 21词≤文章字数≤35词（扣1分） 文章字数≤20词 21词≤文章字数≤35词（扣1分） And he is a doctor. Bob and his friend are on holiday. Bob is on holiday and his friend is with him. Tom is happy because the hotel is very good. Tom is happy. Because the hotel is very good. Because the hotel is very good, Tom is happy. Writing: Conjunctions 　　 × × How many conjunctions are there in the passage? and用在句首，不给分 and连接名词、代词等，不给分 and连接句子、谓语、短语等，给分 because, but等连接从句，给分 because, but等在句首，只连接一个单句，不给分 because, but等在句首，后有主句，给分 Which conjunctions can’t get marks? √ √ √ √ Writing: Punctuation Upper and lower case 　　 大写：句首、人名和地名等的首字母、专有名词的首字母，等等 标点：逗号、句号、问号、感叹号、撇号、引号等 C c, K k, L l, O o, P p; S s; U u; V v; W w; X x; Y y; Z z Writing: Punctuation Upper and lower case 　　 注意“,” “.”及大小写的规范写法 The summer holiday is coming, There are swimming pool so many people, The waiter have a juice. The woman have a ire cream. The man is reading the book. The boy is swimming. (33) 2 3 1 Where are these people? What are they doing? 三句全对句子，回答了两个问题，应得3分 三句全对句子结构一样，最多得2分 字数33个，扣一分 1 无连词，0分 0 1 标点错2个，得１分 大小写没错，得１分 字数不够，扣１分 ∧ 拼写及语法错误6个，0分 0 It’s sunny on Sunday. So many people are going to swimming club. Three people are swimming now. How happ they are! The girl is wearing a black dress. She is neither singing nor dancing, she is eating ice cream. And she’s father is reading. Other man is giving food for customers. (51) It’s sunny on Sunday. So many people are going to swimming club. Three people are swimming now. How happ they are! The girl is wearing a black dre