写作13 英语写作常见错误类型.pptVIP

5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误 Excessive smoking will injure your body. Excessive smoking will injure your health. 5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误 Through inquiry, we learn that he was elected to a new leading post. On inquiry, we learn that he was elected to a new leading post. on inquiry 经询问;经调查 5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误 We are going to visit the exhibition next week. We are going to see the exhibition next week. 5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误 In the basketball game, our team won the British team In the basketball game, our team beat the British team 赢得一场比赛：win the game/match 打赢某人：win over sb.(不能说win sb.) 5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误 学会用英语思考，切忌把写作变成直线翻译 6种常见句子错误分析 1）非完整句错误 2）主动和被动错误 3）主谓不一致错误 4）修饰语问题 5）错用平行结构 6）代词指代不明 1）非完整句错误 非完整句是指以完整句的形式出现的部分句子成分或非独立成分。 一个意思和结构完整的句子至少有主语和谓语两部分，当然祈使句除外。 若将句子中的某部分当做一个句子，就会导致非完整句的错误。 1）非完整句错误 1）非独立性从句单独成句 2）现在分词独立成句 3）细节补充独立成句 4）无主语 1）非完整句错误 非独立性从句是指那些由关系代词（who, whom, whose, which, what, that ),关系副词（where, when, how）或从属连词（after, before, although, as, if, because, until, unless等）引导的句子。这些句子只能在主句中起一个句子成分的作用，因而不能脱离主句而独立存在。一旦脱离主句就会出现非完整句错误。 1）非完整句错误 We must try hard to learn English well. Because it will be very useful in our future work. We must try hard to learn English well, because it will be very useful in our future work. If there isnt Roll-Call system on campus, and could build some bad habits, such as addicted to network. 1）非完整句错误 粗心或过于匆忙 多用心，多检查 2）现在分词独立成句 现在分词短语以及它的独立机构在句子中往往充当状语，表示原因、目的、结果、伴随状况等。 2）现在分词独立成句 They got up early that morning. Hoping to catch up the 6:30 train to Hong Kong. They got up early that morning, hoping to catch up the 6:30 train to Hong Kong. 2）现在分词独立成句 对于现在分词短语形式的非完整句，最好的办法就是改一下标点和大小写，视语义关系的紧密程度把它并入前面或后面一句，使其充当句子的附属成分。当然也可以加入它的逻辑主语，让它真正独立成句。 3）细节补充独立句 句子的细节补充部分，例如举例，罗列，补充说明等一般是既不含主语也不含谓语的一组词语的罗列，如果以句子的形式出现肯定是错句。 3）细节补充独立句 It is hard to keep with monthly payments. Such as telephone, electric, and gas bill. It is hard to keep with monthly payments, such as telephone, electric, and gas bill. 3）细节补充独立句 误以为一个句子的主语和谓语可以同时对随后的一组词语起作用。 与汉语讲究“意合”的语言不同，英语严格