英语写作常见达错误纠正.ppt

英语写作常见表达错误纠正 [1] Some people thing that failure is a bad thing . Firstly , failure has influence in confidence, so it can make people lost their direction. While if someone lost his direction , he won’t make his dream come true forever . That is very serious . 修改版：Some people argue that failure is a bad thing, with the reason being that if people fail to do something, he will lose confidence in such a thing. Besides, constant failures will be bound to affect people’s confidence in doing everything. Without confidence, how can people do things successfully? 英语写作常见表达错误纠正 [2] It is said that “failure is the mother of succeed “ . They are inclined to the idea that if people sum up from the failure , they will learn something and it is useful to get their goal . 修改版：As the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success”, which means /meaning people can always learn something from failure and it is very useful to his future success in achieving goals. 英语写作常见表达错误纠正 [3] It is important for everyone to stay healthy . To other words, everyone wants to stay healthy . How can we stay healthy ? Which is the best way to stay healthy ? It is said that “get ill by the mouth “ , so we must eat healthy first when we want to stay healthy . That means we eat meal on time and make sure the food is ok . 修改版: There is no doubt that everyone wants to stay healthy. Nowadays, it is commonly agreed that health is above wealth. But how can we maintain a healthy body? When asked this question, different people may come up with different ways of keeping fit. Some people say that we should eat healhty diet if we want to avoid getting ill. According to them, people get sick mainly because they eat unhealthy food. 英语写作常见表达错误纠正 [4] We also should take some exercise . if you take some exercise every day , you will become strong and healthy