高三英语：2010年高二名校短文改错天天练练习（四）.docVIP

英语：2010年高二名校短文改错天天练（四） 10 One day Daddy and I was going for a walk around the 1. k+s-5#u lake while a girl rode past us quickly. Suddenly we heard 2. a cry for a help. The girl had fallen into the lake with her 3. bike. Daddy and I ran quickly towards her. We manage 4. to pull her out the water. Then the girl asked us if we could 5. help getting the bike out of the water. Then the girl asked 6. k+s-5#u us if we could help get the bike out of the lake. Daddy was 7. only too ready to help him. When we pulled her bike out， 8. she rode away even with saying “ Thanks ” to us. 9. I felt quite disappointing at her deed. 10. 答案及解析 1.was 改为were 2. while 改为when , 本句用到be doing…when 短语 3.去掉a 4. manage 改为managed ,时态应该前后一致k+s-5#u 5. out 后加of 6. getting 改为get , help do sth “帮助多某事” 7. 正确 8. him改为her，人称应该一致，指前面提到的女孩 9. with 改为without 10. disappointing 改为disappointed 11 Jack was a heavy smoker. His mother didnt like him smoking，and 1. he couldnt give it up. At about 9 oclock in one evening, Jack was seen 2. smoking in the living-room again. “Dont smoke in the living-room, 3. k+s-5#u Jack!”said his mother in an unhappy voice. Heared this，Jack went 4. back his own room and shut the door. While he was sitting in bed, 5. he couldnt help smoke again. About an hour later，Jacks mother 6. smell heavy smoke. She got up and opened Jacks bedroom. Good heavens! 7. Jacks quilt was burning while he was sleep！ She quickly got some 8. water and put up the fire. Jack was given a good lesson.“Ill give up 9. smoking from now on, Mum.”Jack said in low but determined voice. 10. 答案及解析 1. and 改为but， 前后是转折关系 2. 去掉in， 这是典型的中国式英语 3. 正确 4. Heard 改为Hearing 5. back后面加to, goback to somewhere 回到某地 6. smoke改为smoking， can’t help doing sth “情不自禁做某事” k+s-5#u 7. smell 改为smelt， 时态应该前后一致 8. sleep 改为asleep或sleep