复习比较作文.pptVIP

比较型作文 一、运用比较手法来阐明自己的观点 对于这类作文，要求在比较所讨论的两个事物优缺点的同时，阐述自己的观点与倾向。在具体写作时，对赞成的事物要多写优点，缺点则一笔带过，而对反对的事物，则要大写特写其缺点，优点一笔带过。这样处理，作者的观点才能得以体现。这类作文通常有两种写法，即：整体比较法和分项比较法。 Comparison and Contrast A VS B 1) One-Side-at-a-Time （整体比较法） A: a b c B: a b c 2) Point-by-Point（分项比较法） a: A B b: A B c: A B e.g. To Live in The City Or The Countryside 1. One-Side-at-a-Time（整体比较法）: A: live in the city B: live in the countryside a. convenient life a. inconvenient life b. good education b. poor education c. pollution c. close to nature 2. Point-by-Point（分项比较法） a. life A: live in the city B: in the countryside (convenient) (inconvenient) b. education A: live in the city B: in the countryside (good) (poor) c. environment A: live in the city B: in the countryside (pollution) (fresh air) 十句作文模式整体比较法City Life ，Your Best Choice Part I S1: Topic: why do we talk about the subject, what are the subject you are going to talk about S2: Thesis: your preference for A or B S1：如今越来越多的人渴望改变自己目前的生活方式，有的选择大城市，有的选择农村 S2：我的选择——城市生活 Part II S3: Concede B’s advantages S4: But B’s disadvantage 1 S5: 2 S6: 3 S7: A’s corresponding advantage1 S8: 2 S9: 3 S3：让步承认农村生活的优点，比如安静、贴近自然、污染少等 S4：农村生活缺点1 S5：农村生活缺点2 S6：农村生活缺点3 S7：城市生活相对应的优点1 S8：城市生活相对应的优点2 S9：城市生活相对应的优点3 Part III S10: Conclusion: restate your choice S10：结论：城市生活，你最佳选择 Exercise1： Please analyze the situation if you choose B: country life. How to write the essay in 10 sentences? 附：十句作文句型： S1: With the arrival of information age the wide use of computers/the internet the development of science and technology the improved standard