《四级作文.pptVIP

一. 评分标准 二. 写作步骤 三. 具体体裁 四. 作业 Writing Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 一. 评分标准 Full mark: 15 Five grades: 2, 5, 8, 11, 14 总体评分 0---白卷，离题，只写几个词语 2---条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，错误多且严重 5---基本切题，表达不清楚，连贯性差，严重错误较多 8---基本切题，有些地方表达不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误多，且有些严重 11---切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，少量语言错误 14---切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 累计字数 扣分 110-119 1 100-109 2 90-99 3 80-89 5 70-79 7 69 9 字数只能多不能少 注：1. 如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句， 均不计入所写字数； 2. 在规定的三段式作文中，只写一段给0-4分， 只写两段给0-9分。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 二. 写作步骤 审题 构思 写作 检查修改 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 1. 审题 体裁：议论、说明、记叙、描写 写作目的: P.264 主题: 写作重点 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Computer Age ① 近年来，计算机的应用越来越广泛。 ② 计算机能做很多有益的事。 ③ 计算机也有许多副作用。 体裁： 说明、议论兼有 主题： popularity, benefit, disadvantage Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 2. 构思 2.1 搜集相关材料（brainstorming） 2.2 筛选有用材料，做到少而精 2.3 确定主题句 提示句是否可以作为主题句？可转变表达方式，忌字面翻译。 2.4 列提纲，打腹稿 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 2.1-2 搜集材料并筛选 Example: Computer Age ① popularity of computer use: University, farm, factory, shop… ② benefit of computers: Improve work efficiency Do difficult work Take over routine jobs Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. ③ disadvantage of computers: Computer crime Computer virus Indulgence of children in computer games