小作文(开头段+基本句型)讲述.ppt

第4步 结尾段 注意事项： 结尾段总结趋势，很有可能用到while 这个词 选择重要信息（一般是2-3个）结尾段总结最高值 勿表达个人观点；不要出现数据。 不要用in conclusion，可以用to summarise, in summary，overall 判断动/静态图，几根线 每亿个乘客里程数中会发生事故和受伤的数量 * 判断动/静态图，几根线 判断动/静态图，几根线 判断动/静态图，几根线 增加了两倍,就是原来的1+2=3倍增加到两倍,就是原来的2倍 * In terms of:就…而言 * 增加了两倍,就是原来的1+2=3倍增加到两倍,就是原来的2倍 * In terms of:就…而言 * 增加了两倍,就是原来的1+2=3倍增加到两倍,就是原来的2倍 * e.g. The number of population was two million in 2005, showing an increase of 10%. e.g. The remaining 20% of the total spending is distributed to travelling and books, accounting for 12% and 8% respectively. 注意：the percentage ... accounts for.... 错误表达 * 增加了两倍,就是原来的1+2=3倍增加到两倍,就是原来的2倍 * 增加了两倍,就是原来的1+2=3倍增加到两倍,就是原来的2倍 * 增加了两倍,就是原来的1+2=3倍增加到两倍,就是原来的2倍 * 增加了两倍,就是原来的1+2=3倍增加到两倍,就是原来的2倍 * 增加了两倍,就是原来的1+2=3倍增加到两倍,就是原来的2倍 * 开头段简单换词 graph （图表、曲线图） chart (图表) = diagram = shows (v.) = information = the number of = the proportion of = poeple in the USA= how to produce= in three countries= 表达（一段时间) 例如：从1999到2009年 =line graph bar chart，pie chart，flow chart From 1999 to 2009 = between 1999 and 2009 = over a period of 10 years =over the period from 1999 to 2009 = during the period between 1999 and 2009 in the UK, France and Spain the process of producing Americans the percentage of = the figure for the figure for data illustrates figure （流程图）= flow chart 练习: 开头段改写 练习: 开头段改写 The graph provides the information about the amounts of goods transported in the United Kindom by four means of transport over the period from 1974 to 2000. The line graph compares the quantities of goods transported in the United Kindom by four types of transport from 1974 to 2000. The graph illustrates the quantities of goods transported in the United Kingdom by four means of transport from 1974 to 2002. The graph illustrates (how the quantities of goods transported by four means of transport had changed) in the United Kingdom over a period of nearly 30 years. 注意: 从句的完整性 练习: 开头段改写 The following table presents some information about consumer spending on t