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Memo P13 批改中问题： 1. 句子过长, 双核： Further to our previous meeting, we r pleased to announce that the new system about extending parental leave for fathers from 2 weeks to 3 weeks，will come into operation as from 25th Sep. 2. 大多照搬原题，无新意 3．先后关系： 生效日期 与 变化内容？ 4. 关于 ： Refer to..? Concerning to?(少放文首=about) THIS week saw two curious announcements concerning Russian cars. 本周，两项古怪的关于俄罗斯汽车通告出台。 Further to with regard to /as regards。。。/ Regarding… with reference to in connection with in relation to With regard to …, we are pleased to tell you guys that… 5. mixed style: Further to.., I am plea