英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析3.docVIP

英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析3 练评三 试题来源（江苏省石庄高级中学2013届书面表达指导与练习） 下面这幅图片描绘的是一幅反映十一黄金周交通堵塞及交通压力问题的场景。请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。 你的短文应包含以下内容： 1.描述图中所表达的相关信息； 2.分析此现象的原因； 讲 评 图中所表达的相关信息是： 此图片反映的是十一黄金周交通堵塞的问题。图片中，大量的小汽车堵在高速公路上，引起了严重的交通堵塞。人们等得有点不耐烦，为了消磨时间，他们有的在锻炼身体，有的在看书，甚至有的在逗狗玩等等。 在具体描述图片所表达的相关信息时要增加相关的细节。如：结合“十一黄金周”，我们就要联想到，人们利用这一段时间要做的主要两件事：一是回家乡探亲访友；二是到外地旅游。 ②On the eight-day national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways. As is shown in the picture, so many people went home to pay a visit to their families and friends and to travel in other places in their cars. As a result, a large number of cars stuck in the expressways. How horrible the traffic was! Many people caught in jam were so impatient that some of them were seen playing sports, reading or even playing with dogs to kill time. 分析原因我们可以从以下几方面来进行： 1.随着经济的发展，私家车的增加； 2.人们节假日（尤其是“十一黄金周” 高速公路免费政策的实施）出行方式的选择：选择自驾而不是乘坐公共交通工具； 3.现有交通设施满足不了需要； 4.…… 具体进行表达 ①As the economy is developing, the number of private cars has been increasing than expected. More people prefer to drive their cars to travel instead of using public transport, which will save money thanks to the toll-free road policy. The traffic system is not efficient enough for so many cars. ③As the economy is developing, more and more average people afford to buy cars. As a result, the number of private cars has been increasing than expected. As the toll-free road policy is carried out, which will cost car divers less money, many people would choose to travel in their cars rather than use public transport. The traffic system cannot cater to the travel of people need. 围绕上述分析的原因提出自己的建议 ①The government should improve the traffic system. It is necessary to provide updated traffic information for drivers on the road. Drivers can prefer the roads which are not crowded. Avoiding the rush time is also a good way. If the government abandoned the tolls altogether, travel times would be more flexible for drivers. ③The government shou