《中考面对面》2015年中考英语（山西，人教版）高频话题写作指南八年级（下）Units5-6难忘的事情（共16张PPT）.ppt

* 第三部分 高频话题写作指南 难忘的事 写作导图 从全国近五年有关难忘的一件事相关话题书面表达的命题来看,此类作文命题通常有两个角度： 1.和学生学习相关的难忘事情或经历； 2.和学生日常生活相关的经历。 结合山西考情,可以预测第一种命题角度考查几率更大。 An unforgettable thing The things that are unforgettable The description of the thing Your feelings what’s the unforgettable thing when, where, who, how, why excited, moved, happy, sad, angry… 亮点句型速成 常用句型：I will never forget the class. It gave me an important lesson. 推荐句型：①I will never forget the class because it gave me an important lesson. ②I will never forget the class which gave me an important lesson. ③The class which gave me an important lesson is unforgettable. 常用句型：I am deeply moved by what Mike did. 推荐句型：①I am deeply moved by the things that Mike did. ②What Mike did moved me deeply/a lot. (一)开头句 1.I still remember the day last summer when I went for a picnic with my father. (二)中间句 2.There is no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. 3.These magic words touched my heart and I will never forget him. (三)结尾句 4.In my opinion, friends are the persons who can share happiness and sorrow with us. 典例剖析(’14齐齐哈尔改编) 一曲《时间都去哪儿了》唱红了春晚,引起很多人的共鸣,让我们感受到时光飞逝。三年的初中生活即将结束,你与老师和同学之间有很多美好的回忆。请写一件难忘的事。内容须包含以下要点： ●your unforgettable experience ●your feelings about the experience ●what you have learned from the experience 要求：1.词数为80词左右; 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,提取信息： 1.①该篇书面表达以流行歌曲引入主题,形式新颖,要求写一篇叙事的记叙文；②考生一定要细读具体的要求,该篇作文的内容是同学间或师生间发生过的一件令人难忘的事,一定要围绕主题进行写作,最好是身边的让自己有感触的事件。 2.写作时用第一人称。 3.写自己的感受用一般现在时；叙述三年初中生活发生过的事,用一般过去时。 4.词数为80词左右,不得出现真实姓名、校名。 【高分范文】 One day, the teacher asked who broke the window. I didn’t dare to admit, or I would be in trouble, I thought. I didn’t want to raise my hand, but something much stronger than me pulled it up. The teacher walked to me and touched my head. Instead of punishing me, he gave me a book and said he knew how I liked books. And it was only for my honesty. I couldn’t believe it! I wasn’t punished but got my favorite book Harry Potter. Till now,