shelley写作二课件.ppt

写作二（20分） 词数不少于80词 2. The way to express one’s opinion * Shelley Chongqing chaoyang middle school 今年微博（microblog) 在中国越来越流行。假设你是校报记者，请根据下列提示为校报写一篇介绍微博的英语短文。 写作要点： 1. 方便交流，分享心情，释放压力； 2. 泄露隐私，浪费时间； 3. 个人观点或者建议。 高分作文的标准： １．完全完成了规定任务； ２．覆盖所有内容要点； ３．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇; ４．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运用能力； ５．有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑； ６．完全达到了预期的写作目的． Para 1 illustrate the advantages and the disadvantages of microblog Para 2 to reflect your opinions or suggestions on using microblog induction (分—总） deduction (总—分） In recent years, microblog has been more and more popular. Precisely , it has become part of people’s life. (Many factors contribute to the wide spread of micro-blogging.) Transitional（过渡） expressions: The ways to express the contrary: however, on the other hands, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, unlike, whereas, nevertheless, instead, conversely…….. Practise: In my opinion, from my point of view as far as…be concerned, as for…, as I see it, personally speaking from my part….. Practice: adequate vocabulary the accuracy of sentence structure 1. Read one possible version carefully and find out the words and expressions which you think are better than your writing. 2. Choose what you can’t express out to recite and practise them in speaking and reading. 3.Attention to the transitional words or prases. Example:写作（满分20分） 假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。 请根据下列要点给他写封信： 帮他分析原因 给他提出建议 陈述你帮助他的具体打算 注意：词数80词左右 A proper organization Paragraph I: The present situation Paragraph II: My opinion The importance of the start 高考试卷中的失败案例： I am your new classmate Li Hua，and I come from Xinhua middle school. From your letter I know you could not get well with the classmates ，___________ [失败点]：翻译试题要求 （要求不等于要点） 高考试卷中的成功案例 I have learned that you are upset because you find it difficult to get used to the new environment，so，as your new classmate，I am writing to help you . [成功点]：利用提供的背景，开门见山，直接谈问题。 高考优秀试卷：