GRE范文及赏析-Issue73-智课网.pdf

智课网 GRE备考资料 GRE 官方写作题库 73 Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach. 范文： There are more and more complaints from students who find that what they learn in classroom can hardly be directly applied to job related tasks. There seems to be a gap between the courses content and the reality at work. If faculty worked outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach, it may help provide more satisfactory educational experience given the practical demands that can be expected of the students in their future career. However, one must be reasonable in their expectations because not all fields would benefit from having the instructor work outside of the educational institution. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 本段前两句解释了与本题相关的背景，指出很多学生认为课堂所学与 工作所需结合不紧密，课堂教学内容与工作实际需要之间存在差距。 第三句起，联系到题目的叙述，提出作者的观点，即题中所说的 policy需要考虑具体学科，不是所有领域都能因此受益。 此段功能 分析题目，解释背景，提出观点。 It is not necessarily guaranteed that, with experience outside of the classroom, instruction in the classroom can be improved. Generally there are two categories of disciplines with different purposes of education in universities: one is to train students with practical skills which put them at more advantageous position in the job markets (engineering or law school), another aims at cultivating well-rounded persons (history, philosophy, or some theoretical science). The education in these disciplines does not guarantee the students to earn more money but to cultivate such abilities of independent and critical thinking, creativity and the desire to explore the unknown territories. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 首句提纲挈领，指出教师在校外的工作经验未必能保证课堂教学更 成功。接下来将学校里的学科以教学目的分为两类：讲求实际技能 类与培养基本思维类。 此段功能 综合地展开解释了作者的观点：教师在校外的工作经验未必能保证 课堂教学更成功；并且将大学里的学科按教学目的分为两类，为接 下来的论述做准备。 Let’s address the faculties responsible for training students with practical skills. For these instructors, the experience outside the clas