作文高级词汇句型.ppt

Polish up Your composition ;你的很多同学一直为他们的父母总是不经允许就翻看他们的日记而感到苦恼。 请你根据以下提示，用英语给校英语报写一篇文章， 帮助同学们解决这个苦恼。;Teaching aim: Improve students’ ability of writing by polishing up the sentences. ;1.Parents search for their children’s diaries without allowed. 2.They don’t want to others know them. 3.The reason why parents do it properly because they want to know whether we are happy and comfortable in school. 4.Their parents do that can make their children not believe them. 5.Parents look children’s diaries is also harmful. 6.Of course, harm is not avoided. ;……We students’ worry is that parents read our diaries when they are not allowed to do this. Many reasons lead to parents doing this. They read our diaries to understand us better. After they know our thoughts and feelings in the diary, they can help us solve many troubles in daily life. ….. we should take many measures to solve the problem. For us, we should talk with our parents about our thoughts. For parents, parents should gain children’s permission to read the diaries. It is the best way to improve relationship between parents and children. ; 高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 目的。 5. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构(complex sentence structures)或较高级词汇(advanced words)所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。;;We students’ worry is that parents read our diaries when they are not allowed to do this. Many reasons lead to parents doing this. They read our diaries to understand us better. After they know our thoughts and feelings in the diary, they can help us solve many troubles in daily life. …..; we should take many measures to solve the problem. For us, we should talk with our parents about our thoughts. For parents, parents should gain children’s permission to read the diaries. It is the best way to improve relationship between parents and children. ;阅读再评We students’ worry is that parents look through our diaries without permission. Many reasons lead to parents doing this. They