八上段考作文讲评.pptxVIP

八 上 段 考 作 文 点 评;分数段;;10分;10分;第五档;9分;are;第五档;8分;are;theyre;, such as tigers;第四档;an;第三档;s;第三档;4分;第二档;3分;第二档;2分;1分;0分;中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准.docx;本次考试中书面表达部分的主要问题 1、名词单、复数的运用 可数名词复数+s(es)，如：pandas (the panda), animals, forests, villages, cities, parks 不可数名词没有复数，如：bamboo, water, food 2、主谓一致 1）主语是三单，谓语动词用三单 +s (es) 2）主语是复数，谓语动词用原形，be动词用are 3、用词错误 fewer and fewer, less and less;本次考试中写作部分的主要问题 4、大小写与标点符号 There are many wild animals in danger. Such as, tigers, lions and pandas. There are many wild animals in danger, such as tigers, lions and pandas. human beings need to protect animals Human beings need to protect animals. ;5、常用句型运用错误 There be sb. doing... There be sth. to do... 1) There are many people make forests small. There are many people making forests smaller. or Many people are making forests smaller. Forsets are getting smaller. 2) There will be more bamboo are feeding the pandas. There will be more bamboo to feed the pandas. 3）There are many animals are in danger. There are many animals in danger. Many animals are in danger. ;本次考试中写作部分的主要问题 6、动词不定式没掌握好 1) They dont have safe places live and there isnt enough clean water drinking. They dont have safe places to live and there isnt enough clean water to drink. 2) We need protect animals in danger. We need to protect animals in danger. 7、形容词和副词的比较级、最高级的运用 The module is one of difficult modules in the book. The module is one of the most difficult modules in the book.;Homework Make sentences with the phrases: 1. such as + n.pl / doing 2. one of + the + 最高级+ n.pl. 3. There be sb. doing... 4. There be sth. to do... 5. Lets help do... 6. I l