2016-2017高中英语 2.4 Writing课件 新人教版选修6.pptVIP

* 思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 如何改写诗歌 下面是唐朝诗人李绅的名作《悯农》的英文翻译,请写一篇100词左右的短文解释一下诗的意思及诗中所蕴含的作者的思想感情。 Sympathy on the Farmers At noon,a farmer is weeding, Down the field,sweat is dripping. Who knows rice on a dish, Every grain is full of moiling? 思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 1.本文要求对诗歌进行解释,首先要根据诗歌的内容来确定人称、顺序。 2.其次要准确提炼出诗歌中所包含的信息,灵活运用自己的语言,尽可能用多种方法来表达、替换原文语句的内容。 3.最后,要针对诗歌中所提供的信息,发表自己的观点。 4.写作时注重层次分明,条理清晰,过渡衔接要自然。 思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 参考表达词汇: 1.标题　title 2.在田间劳作　working in the fields 3.流汗　sweat 4.提醒　remind 5.珍惜　treasure 常用句式: 1.Here is a poem titled　　? 2.It goes like this:　　? 3.But who knows exactly　　? 4.　　　wrote this poem in order to　　　? 5.I think it’s especially important that　　? 思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen in the Tang Dynasty,which is popular with Chinese readers.It goes like this:It’s so hot outside at this summer noon time,yet the farmers are still working in the fields.They are sweating all over,and frequently their sweat falls into the soil,where the crops grow.But who knows exactly all the delicious dishes on our table come from the hard work of the farmers? Li Shen wrote this poem in order to remind people of the importance of the farmer’s hard work.Nowadays,many young people waste a lot of food.I think it’s especially important that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain. *