人教版英语必修5：Unit2periodⅳwriting.ppt

* Period Ⅳ Writing 原句 1 Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the sites she wanted to see in London.(教材 P14)由于担心时 间不够，张萍玉把她想要在伦敦参观的地方列了一张单子。 点评 这个句子是由两个简单句合并而成： ①Zhang Pingyu was worried about the time available. ② She had made a list of the sites she wanted to see in London. 合并：由于句①和句②之间有“因为……所以……”的逻 辑关系，可以用“worried”过去分词作原因状语放句首。 仿写 ①由于对即将到来的去那个偏远农场的行程感到兴奋，李 虹坐立不安，因此她起得很早。 (提示：即将到来的 coming; 偏远的 remote; 坐立不安 fidget around) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ②由于旅行一天之后感到很累，李虹早早地上床休息了， 没有吃晚餐。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ Excited about the coming trip to the remote farm, Li Hong fidgeted around, so she got up very early. Tired after a days trip, Li Hong went to bed early without having supper. 原句 2 To her great surprise, Zhang Pingyu found the Queens jewels guarded by special royal soldiers who, on special occasions, still wore the four-hundred-year-old uniform of the time of Queen Elizabeth Ⅰ.(教材 P14)让张萍玉异常惊讶的是，她发现女王的 珠宝由皇家特别卫士守护着，而这些士兵在一些特殊的日子仍 然穿着 400 年前伊丽莎白一世女王时代的制服。 点评 这个句子是由三个简单句合并而成： ①Zhang Pingyu found the Queens jewels. ②The Queens jewels were guarded by special royal soldiers. ③ The soldiers, on special occasions, still wore the four-hundred-year-old uniform of the time of Queen Eli-zabeth Ⅰ. 合并之第一步：由于句②用来补充说明句①，而句①又包 含感观动词 found, 所以可以用过去分词做宾语补足语，将①② 句合并； 合并之第二步：由于句③和句②之间有个共同词 “soldiers”，故用定语从句将这两句合并。 仿写 ①让李虹高兴的是，她看到这些生活在农村的小孩子被她 所描述的城市生活深深地吸引住了。 (提示：深深地 deeply) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ②让李老师失望的是，他感到有些学生被电脑游戏吸引了 而非学习。 (提示：失望 disappointment；而不是 rather than) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ To her happiness, Li Hong saw the chi