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书面表达——记叙文 看图、日记 目标： 过程： 一、呈现题目 二、解题过程 1、审题 2、抓要点 3、连词成句 4、连句成篇 三、评价 四、总结 1、审题 人称： 时态： 话题： 文体： 功能： 2、抓要点 时间(when)： 地点(where)： 人物(who)： 事件(what)： 过程(how)： 我和同班同学一同爬西山。 我们早上7点在校门口集合。 不久以后开始下小雨。 我们骑车出发。 8点到达山脚。 雨停了。 开始爬山。 达到山顶。 观景、拍照、唱歌、下棋。 野餐后下山。 4点到家。 筋疲力尽。 Today, my classmates and I climbed the West Mountain and had a picnic on the top. Seven o’clock in the morning, all of us gathered at our school gate. Although an unexpected light rain began to fall, we set out as planned. After an hour’s bike riding, we arrived at the foot of the mountain. Seeing the rain also stopped, we couldn’t wait to climb. Our efforts were rewarded by the fascinating view from the top! We enjoyed ourselves on the mountain, singing songs, playing chess, and taking pictures. It was such a long time before we finally sat on rocks to have the picnic. After the picnic, we went down the mountain. I got home at four, worn out but happy! Today, my classmates and I climbed the West Mountain and had a picnic on the top. Seven o’clock in the morning, all of us gathered at our school gate. Although an unexpected light rain began to fall, we set out as planned. After an hour’s bike riding, we arrived at the foot of the mountain. Seeing the rain also stopped, we couldn’t wait to climb. Our efforts were rewarded by the fascinating view from the top! We enjoyed ourselves on the mountain, singing songs, playing chess, and taking pictures. It was such a long time before we finally sat on rocks to have the picnic. After the picnic, we went down the mountain. I got home at four, worn out but happy! Today, my classmates and I climbed the West Mountain and had a picnic on the top. Seven o’clock in the morning, all of us gathered at our school gate. Although an unexpected light rain began to fall, we set out as planned. After an hour’s bike riding, we arrived at the foot of the mountain. Seeing the rain also stopped, we couldn’t wait to climb. Our efforts were rewarded by the fascinating view from the