写段落主题句.ppt

评分标准及解题要求 读写任务写作（25分） Definition（定义） The topic sentence is the theme of a paragraph which is often summarized in one sentence. 好的学习习惯帮助你成功的经历 After reading the story above, I recall the time when I dared not speak English because I was poor in pronunciation. How to write the topic sentence 概括（5分）概括全面，表述清晰 写作内容（20分）:主题明确，内容丰富 2007-2012的广东高考卷中，都给出三条内容要点。 因读写任务“写作内容”所列要点的顺序已具有内在的逻辑性，所以考生应该按照试题所给内容要点顺序写作。一般是每个写作要点安排为一个自然段，且将写作内容的每个要点作为各段的主题句，将主题句放在各段的开头，这样既可以避免考生在写作时跑题或遗漏要点，又方便阅卷老师落实要点是否齐全 。 . 直接回答要点 Model: 假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应？ （2009广东高考读写任务要点2） If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me. 你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？ 写作要点是询问考生的看法、原因时，对提问直接作出回答。 In my eyes, my ideal college life is wonderful/relaxing. 常用词组： In my opinion / as for me / as far as I am concerned/from my point of view 模式1 回答个人观点 回答原因 Model: 使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因？ There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. The reasons for this are obvious… There are several reasons that contribute to… … for reasons as follows The reason why… is that… Useful expressions for reasons: 你支持青少年的秘密应该与父母分享的理由是什么？ I insist that teenagers’ secrets should be shared with their parents for reasons as follows. …的原因显而易见 …的原因有多种 …的原因如下 …的原因是 句型提示 回答感受 Model: Tom 来信说他现在学习压力大，请谈谈你读信后的感受 I felt terribly sorry for you when I read your letter, in which you expressed the pressure from your study. 吴菊萍挽救了一个从10楼掉下来的2岁女婴后被称为“最美妈妈”，请谈谈你对此感受。 After reading the story, I was absolutely touched by Wu Juping who saved the two-year old baby. 常用表达： I appreciate what you say and am sorry to have caused you so much worry. I’m also touched that… After reading the passage, I was deep in thought. … After reading this speech, I felt really sorry for the student who... Having read the passage，I felt greatly inspired and convinced that… 表明立场 Model: 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 (2009年广东高考读写任务要点3) I believe that taking photos wi