课堂讲评2012高考2卷短文改错及完型填空.docVIP

一、课堂讲评2012全国卷II短文改错和完型填空 （一）短文改错 Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. 76.______ Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live 77.______ without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 78.______ without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. 79.______ Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. 80.______ To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all 81.______ out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no 82.______ drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find 83.______ ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84.______ water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 85.______ Sincerely, Li Hua 评析： ① 大意： 高考一卷短文改错内容是节约汽油和节电，此文为节水给编辑写的一封信，提出 水是动物生存和工农业发展之必须。但形势日益严峻，因水资源越来越短缺。所 提 建议为：a. 植树 b. 节约饮用水，不能让自来水变成常流水 c. 洗涮用水 和洗澡水的重复利用。 ② 改错策略： a.定语从句考察（较难）...especially bath water for which is quite a lot，应该去 掉 for 。我们应当找到利用洗衣水和利用消耗量很大的洗澡水的方法。考生要意识到which前介词for的多余，因which指代洗澡水，是洗澡水“量大”，因而和for没有任何关系。 b. 指代错误（较难）。 Many countries属第三人称，因此代词应为they而非we，把we 改为they。 C. “used”过去分词作后置定语较难，被修饰词为water,即在洗东西和洗澡中“被”用掉的水，因此要用used作后置定语。 d. 选择连词（较难）。植树与节水的关系：之所以植树是因为树有助于节水，因此把though改为because、as或since，但for不合适，因为for表原因时，前常用逗号分开，起补充说明作用。 e. 时态改错（较易），但seemed容易变为seem,应当根据主语为第三人称变成seems。 f. 第一人称指代较易，you后加my, opinion可数名词不可单独存在，此处特指我的意见。 g. 固定搭配neither后的or改为nor（较易）。 i. 冠词考查较易。a problem改为the problem，特指上文水短缺的问题。 j.复数名词表泛指（较易）animal改为animals，可数名词不可单独存在，此处前面是 “We”，所以后面用“animal”的复数形式表泛指。 ② 答案：76. opinion前加my77.animal---animals78.or—nor79.seemed—seems 80 we--they 81. a--the/this/that 82. though--because/since/as83. 正确 84.using--used 85. 去掉for （二）完型填空 　　Around twenty years ago I was living in York. 21 I had a lot of experience and a Masters degree, I could not find 22 work.　　I was 23 a school bus to make ends meet and 24 with a friend of mine, for I had lost my flat．I had 25 five interviews (面试) with a company and one day between bus runs they calle