汉译英8-.ppt

Lecture 8 Beauty of Neatness Warm-up Practice Analysis-practice-appreciation Warm-up Practice: Correct following C-E translation 1.周末许多人睡得很晚。 [误] Many people sleep late at weekends.2.一辆白色轿车前来接新郎新娘去教堂。 [误] A white car turned up to take the groom and the bride to the church. 3.你去弄些水来。 [误] Go and bring some water. 4.我们一起跟着音乐跳舞吧！ [误] Lets dance with the music. 5.你真是红光满面。[误] Your face is all red. 6.海伦就像一只骄傲的公鸡，从来不爱搭理别人。[误] Helen is proud as a cock, and she never talks to others. 12本汉英翻译第8次\12本lecture8链接.ppt What? “整饬的意思是整齐，有条理。整饬美即整齐美和调理美的和谐统一。”（《现代汉语词典》） How? “汉语若要达到整饬美的行文效果，可以用骈体，即并列的、对偶的语句，以区别于散体。” 昔我往矣，杨柳依依；今我来思，雨雪霏霏。 《诗经.小雅.采薇》 When I set out so long ago, Fresh and green was the willow. When now homeward I go, There is a heavy snow. (汪榕培 译) When I left there, Willows shed tear, I come back now, Snow bends the bough. (许渊冲 译) Try 1. 一年，两年，三年，你的望眼欲穿，一年，两年，三年，我的归心似箭。（蒋光慈《写给母亲》） 2. 一年年，燕子来了去了； 一年年，阶前的草绿了黄了。（陈敬容《只要是广阔的世界》） 1. Year in year out you’ve been looking forward with eager expectation to my home-coming; year in year out I’ve been looking forward with great anxiety to returning home.(李定坤 译) 2.Year after year the swallows come and go; Year after year the grass before the terrace grows green, yellow.(庞秉钧 译) Practice，Analysis Appreciation 燕子去了，还有再来的时候；杨柳枯了，有再青的时候；桃花谢了，有再开的时候。但是，聪明的，你告诉我，我们的日子为什么一去不复返呢？---是有人偷了他们罢：那是谁？又藏在何处呢？是他们自己逃走了：现在又到了哪里呢？ Swallows may have gone, but there is a time of return ; willow trees may have died back, but there is a time of regreening; peach blossoms may have fallen, but they will bloom again. Now, you the wise, tell me, why should our days leave us, never to return? If they had been stolen by someone, who could it be? Where could he hide them? If they had made the escape themselves, then where could they stay at the moment? 我不知道他们给了我多少日子，但我的手几乎是渐渐空虚了。在默默里算着，八千多日子已经从我手中溜去，像针尖上一滴水滴在大海里。我的日子滴在时间的流里，没有声音，也没有影子，我不仅头涔涔而泪潸潸了。  I don’t know how many days I have been given to spend, but do feel my hands ar