海天四六级写作讲义(张培 最新版)笔记.docVIP

2015年大学英语四六级写作精讲班内部讲义 编讲：张培（新浪微博：@张培老师） ★★★第一部分： 知己知彼：四\六级作文高分必须知道的四大核心问题 Q1：字数与段落要求：_________ Q2：评分具体细则：_____________ Q3：高分作文的标志：____________ Q4：临考前如何准备：____________ ★★★第二部分： 囤积粮草： Part One：必背高分闪光表达 1、解决问题 _______________ 2、对某事产生影响 ______________ 3、在某事上起作用 ______________ 4、关注（重视）某事 ____________ 5、付出努力做某事 ______________ 6、采取措施做某事 ______________ 7、阐述原因（导致这个趋势/现象的原因有很多） 8、对于某个现象/问题观点不同 9、阐述重要性 10、描述一种现象 11、表达观点 12、环境类表达总结 13、文化教育类表达总结 14、社会现象类表达总结 15、现代科技类表达总结 Part Two：高分写作手法特训----模仿 1、It is undeniable that shopping on the Internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. 2、A host of individuals deem that a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. 3、The next sight to visit is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty built more than one thousand years ago. 4、although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. 5、It is widely accepted , indeed, that they have gained increasing popularity among people in all walks of life. Part Three：经典范文精读精讲-------学以致用（input-----output） Food Safety （描述现象Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health,（※非限制性定语从句 which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily. （阐述原因There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course of （在什么的过程中the rapid economic evolution（经济发展,(万能原因) we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend. （措施段落As Confucius instructed（引用名言增强文章说服力, it is better late than never. （措施的主题句Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend（被动在写作中可以使用主动和被动相结合. The govern