重庆英语高考书面表达评讲课件.ppt

重庆市高考英语考试说明中对书面表达的要求： 要求考生根据所给提示与要求进行书面表达。 考生应能： 1.在一定的语境中准确使用英语语法和词汇； 2.使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地用英语表达自己的意思。 高考英语书面表达评分标准明确了各个档次的要求和给分范围,其中高分档次的第五档和第四档都有这样的要求:覆盖所有主要内容要点;应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;使用了较复杂的结构或较高级的词汇;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑连贯。 开放作文： 书面表达如何写？ It is more a small computer than a normal dictionary. It has so many functions that it is almost as smart as a computer. Downloading e-books is also available for you. It provides the function of downloading the electronic books to broaden your horizons. The volume of NOAH-DICT is small, thus it can be carried and operated easily. Wherever you go you can carry it conveniently for its small size. What’s the most important is that its price is very reasonable. 学生作品佳句欣赏 Common mistakes in our writing(学生出现的集中错误) Drifting off the topic（偏题） or leaving out some required information（要点不全） Simple and direct translation / Chinglish expressions Improper sentence patterns and improper words 主要是electric, electrical和electronic 的误用 Spelling mistakes 长单词的正确拼写: convenient, pronunciation 易混淆单词的运用: metal medal price prize 过去分词的正确拼写: controlled heard 双写的 “l” 书面表达五部曲 step1 topic exploring 审题 step2 wording 构词 step3 sentence making 成句 step4 essay writing 成篇 step5 improving 修订 What makes a good piece of writing? 1.neat writing书写 2. content内容 3. structure结构 4. language语言 Good first impression Well organized and smoothly developed Everything required included No Chinglish No Grammatical mistakes exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns Five characteristics of outstanding writing: (高分作文的五大特性) 1. sense of order (条理性: 段落完整，层次分明） 2. accuracy (准确性: 语法准确，用词精当） 3. fluency (流畅性: 层次清晰，行文连贯） 4. conciseness variety (简洁、多样性: 语言简 洁，不重复） 5. ideo