广东省高考基础写作要点及范文.pptVIP

人物简介的一般步骤：Give the right order D．生平： 1. 李敏，个子高，身体好，很活跃，是我们的班长。 LiMin, who is a tall, healthy and active girl, is our monitor. LiMin, our monitor, is a tall, healthy and active girl. LiMin, a tall and active girl in good condition, is our monitor. 2. 她各科成绩都很好，喜欢体育运动，又能歌善舞。 Being good at all subjects, ,she has a good command of singing, dancing as well as sports. Not only does she do extremely well in every subject, but also she is good at sports, singing and dancing . 3. 她刚进学校时，在英语学习上遇到不少困难。 At the beginning of her entrance to our school, she had /met with great difficulty in learning English. When first coming to the school, she had great difficulty in learning English. 4. 但她不怕苦，不怕难，努力把英语学好。 ___________, she wasn’t afraid of the hardships, and made every effort/ef?t/ to learn English well. However, instead of giving in to hardships, she made every effort to overcome them. 5. 严于律己，乐于助人，是大家的好榜样，她的父母以她为自豪。 She is self-disciplined and willing to help others, so she is a good model for us and a pride of her parents. Being strict with herself and wiling to help others, she sets us a good example and her parents are proud of her. * (　 )教育：education (　 )外貌／性格appearance ,character (　 )生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time ) ( 　)评估evaluation (　 )概况age, sex, birth-place, background １ ２ ３ ４ ５ 概,貌,育,平,估 1.A. 概况 : 译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一. Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941. * 语法，句法高分tips 可以用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺 B.外貌,性格: 译：他的语文老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发 His Chinese teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair. 巧用with做定语 C. 教育经历： 可以用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼 Having graduated from English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree. 1.在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习,获得了博士学位. 可以用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章 1）Not only is he interested in science,