80128_20140421李润生老师写作课.pptVIP

7分的版本 The bar chart compares the areas of land clearing by human activities (Tree-cutting, breeding, farming) in four continents. （第二段）先总后分的原则： 5分的思维：The number of areas damaged in the Africa was about 1200 million hectares; the figure of damaged area in Asia was 1150 million hectares while that was 400 million hectares in Australia and that was 350 million hectares in Europe. 6分的思维： The land clearing in the Africa and Asia was highly pervasive, almost damaging 1200 million hectares or so whereas that in the Australia and Europe was less serious, about 400 million hectares of land degradati