作文指导公开课2.ppt

考查题型 一. 中考作文要求及命题特点 要求: 要求学生在15—20分钟之内，根据所给提示，写一篇语言正确，内容完整，语句连贯的短文。 特点：贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维空间。 二. 考查形式 中考英语作文考查形式多样： 看图表写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。 题材包括：记叙文、说明文、应用文和议论文 三. 评分细则 1. 评分时根据内容和语言确定档次给分,主要考虑要点、词汇和语法结构的准确性及上下文的连贯。 2. 拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时应根据对表达的影响程度给予考虑。 3.词数太少(不够60词)的或书写不规范的应酌情扣1—2分。 4.以下情况均不给分:书写较差、严重影响表达;所写内容与文章无关。 请根据下面的表格提示,以“Let’s Do Exercise Together” 为题,写一篇短文。 important, keep fit, train a person’s character 列 把提示信息扩写成句子。 保持健康 Doing exercise can help us keep fit. 培养个人的性格 Doing exercise can train a person’s character. 更好的学习 Doing exercise helps us study better. 把提示信息扩写成句子。 上学时步行或骑自行车 We can go to school on foot or by bike. 体育课上做各种锻炼(跑步、打篮球……) In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, playing basketball and so on. 把提示信息扩写成句子。 周末与朋友去爬山、游泳 It’s a good idea to climb mountains and swim with our friends on weekends. 假期去远足 We can go hiking during the vacations. on foot or by bike. _______ , we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, playing basketball and so on. _______ , It’s a good idea to climb mountains and swim with our friends on weekends. ________ , we can go hiking during the vacations. __________ , the more exercise we do , the healthier we will be. 1.表文章结构顺序：first，second，third， finally， in the end，at last 2.表并列补充关系的: what’s more, besides 3.表因果关系的: because, so 4.表举例说明: for example + 句子; such as+ 名/动名词 5. 表达自己的观点: in my opinion 6. 表转折对比: however, but, on the one hand… on the other hand… 7. 表总结: in a word 8. 插入语: I think , as we all know 改 改 do all kinds of exercise, such as running, playing basketball and so on. Third, It’s a good idea to climb mountains and go swim with our friends on weekends. Besides, we can go hiking during the vacations. In a word, the more exercise we do , the healthier we will be. you Thank 大 家 来 找 茬 correct How to write a good composition 书 面 表 达 六 步 法 审 列 扩 连 改 抄 开头：开门见山 中间 抓要点 找连接词 造好句 连句成段 结尾： 与主题相呼应 强劲有力 …… (至少两点) 整理床铺