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写作分析 审题 审题不出错技巧： 一看“中文”了解要求， 二看“英文”确定内容、时态和人称。 题目中英文对照： 假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom想知道 1. 你有什么好的学习或生活习惯？ What good habit do you have? 2. 你是如何养成这个好习惯的？ How did you develop it? 3. 它给你带来什么益处？ What benefits does it bring you? 时态：一现 内容：一个好习惯 时态：一过 内容：怎么养成这个好习惯的 布局谋篇：详写，重点 时态：一现/现完 内容：益处 文篇段落结构 Beginning: 介绍一个好习惯+过渡句（一现） Body： 怎么养成这个好习惯的？（一过） Ending: 益处（一现/现完） 选材、立意是关键 选材的三原则： 话题熟悉，有的可写。 几乎没有不会表达的生词——拼写错误是硬伤。 之前写过相似话题的作文 选材上最忌讳“偏”“奇”“特”——假如自己都不熟悉的话题肯定表达不清、错字满篇。 选材、立意是关键 容易写，且容易写出彩的选材： 1.运动习惯： 范文精编第7个，几乎完全一样，稍加修改，加入高分万能句就能写出一篇十分不错的文章，但是遗憾的是，能够学以致用的人太少： 三班石怡琳，四班廖文凯 2.学习习惯：记笔记、及时背诵复习： 写过相关话题：难忘的老师，其中怎么养成这个习惯可以选取其中内容，能够用这个选材的同学也体现出了很强的学以致用、灵活运用能力： 三班王宇辰、安黛雯，四班李文 选材、立意是关键 容易写，且容易写出彩的选材： 3.读书习惯： 这个选材不会出现太多的生词，减少了拼写和语法错误，并且话题大家都熟悉，有话可写，容易发挥。写得不错的： 三班陈歌扬，四班吴宇嘉 范文1——运动习惯 It goes without saying that everyone has his or her good habits. So do I. One of my good habits is playing basketball for half an hour every day. It becomes an important part in my life. I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I showed great interest in it. When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play basketball in a team. Since then, it has been my good habit. Playing basketball for half an hour every day not only helps me keep fit but also makes me feel relaxed and confident when I am under stress. Particularly, it’s this sport that makes me know the importance of pulling together in a team work. It goes without saying that everyone has his or her good habits. So do I. One of my good habits is reading English novels for half an hour every day. It becomes an important part in my life. I used to have difficulties in learning English and almost gave it up. My English teacher noticed my problem. She gave me an English novel and suggested reading English novels. The book was so interesting that I fell in love with it and showed more interest in learning English. I took a book with me so that I could read at any time and wrote down new words I saw. Little b