高二英语期末作文讲评(2015-01).pptx

Final exam writing;Celebrate birthday for grandpa;choose carefully, think, a warm sweater, the best gift in such a cold winter After choosing carefully, we thought a warm sweater was the best gift in such a cold winter. choose carefully, a warm sweater catch our eyes After we chose carefully, a warm sweater caught our eyes eventually. delighted, buy it to my grandpa as a birthday gift We were delighted to buy it for my grandpa as a birthday gift.;give my grandpa a pleasant surprise, decide to bake a birthday cake It is the first time that… / never… my mum’s help, tiring / take me a long time I feel it’s worth;the cake was out of the oven, the celebration began light candles, sing happy birthday out loud, clap make a wish, blow out the candles a big smile, on grandpa’s face enjoy every mouthful of the cake, a great sense of achievement come over me;take a family picture, record the special moment tears of happiness well up in grandpa’s eyes, I’m filled with a sense of satisfaction and happiness / satisfaction and happiness well up within me;Possible version 1 (红色细节；蓝色连词);Possible version 2 (红色细节；划线句式);Possible version 2;Ending