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修改病句、句式变换（Revising sentences, sentence transformation） The sixth grade review revising sentences Wrong type Example sentences Revision principle and procedure modify Method 1, composition incomplete (Cylinder Subject: who) In class, I listened attentively to the teachers lecture. Rule of change: you cant change the meaning of the sentence. Step 1: read the sentence and find out what it means. The second step is to find out what the sentence should mean, then go back to the original sentence to find out what the problem has affected the expression of the meaning of the sentence. The third step is to find out the mistakes in the sentence, and then modify the sentence according to the meaning of the sentence. Use Repair method Class is over, and all the students are listening attentively to the teacher. Devote ones heart and soul to writing homework. Incomplete composition (missing predicate: how to do it) Our school quiz activities. Our school has an intelligence contest. The students did their homework carefully. Incomplete composition (missing object: what) We should contribute ourselves to the motherland. We should contribute our strength to our motherland. The class is serious. 2, misnomer He achieved great success in the examination. Replacement method He achieved excellent results in the examination. He always hesitates and is not arbitrary. 3, improper collocation We should improve our attitude towards study. Replacement method We should improve our study methods. Our standard of living is constantly improving. 4 word order confusion We should use and understand the words we have learned. Adjustment method We should understand and use the words we have learned. We talked and listened to the presidents report. Wrong type Example sentences Revision principle and procedure modify Method 5, repeat wordy Teacher Lis care, I will never forget my life. Rule of change: you cant change the meaning of the sentence. Step 1: read the sentence and find out what it means. Th