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写作练习之图表作文（十二） 每位同学对紧张的学习生活都有不同的减压方式。假设你对本校100名同学的减压方式进行了调查(调查结果如下面图表所示)，请你根据下面图表内容向你班同学进行介绍，并结合自己的实际提出你的看法和建议。可根据需要适当发挥。 注意：1. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 词数100左右。 参考词汇：图表chart；减压relieve pressure；放松get relaxed 参考范文： Hi，everyone. I have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life. Their ways vary from person to person. As the chart shows，up to 29 percent of the students choose music as their favorite way and the percentage of those turning to TV and the Internet reaches 28，while 18 percent get rid of their worries by sleeping. Surprisingly，exercise and others take up only 15 and 10 percent respectively. Personally I prefer taking exercise to get relaxed. Exercise can lift my mood and build up my strength. Every time I feel stressed，I will take exercise. All worries will disappear with the sweat. Besides，it contributes to sound sleep，which makes me more confident and optimistic. All in all，exercise is a perfect way to reduce anxiety. 【点评】 1．文章没有简单地罗列这些具体事实，而是，首先描述了图表的主要内容，接着结合上面的具体情况，谈到自己的看法和建议，做到有理有据。范文符合写作要求，重点突出，详略得当。 2．范文使用了两处非限定制定语从句as the chart shows up，which makes me more confident and optimistic；使用了while，surprisingly，personally，every time，besides，all in all等过渡词，使文章结构比较紧凑，条理。 1