2015西城一模应用文写作.ppt

应用文写作：故宫游览 你得知故宫免费对教师开放，于是给你校外教写一封邮件。请包括以下内容： 1. 开放时间： 每月的第一个周三； 2. 订票方式：提前10天网上预约； 3. 入场条件：出示教师证。 注意： 1. 词数不少于50；     2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 你得知故宫免费对教师开放，于是给你校外教写一封邮件（告知）。请包括以下内容： 1. 开放时间： 每月的第一个周三； 2. 订票方式：提前10天网上预约； 3. 入场条件：出示教师证。 交际： 开头：是告知，并非邀请。 可添加细节 ---告知理由 结尾：礼貌性表达参观顺利、享受的祝愿。 切记：不用回复、等待、约会…… 范文 Dear Tom, You’ve mentioned that you want to visit the Forbidden City for its rich history and unique architecture. So I’m writing to share some good news with you! Yesterday I happened to read about the free admittance to the Forbidden City. It is open to teachers for free on the first Wednesday of every month. But you have to make an online reservation 10 days in advance. On the day of your visit, you will be asked to present your Teacher Identity Card. Wish you a pleasant trip! Yours, Jerry I would go with you if you want. Beginning！ I am writing to inform you of the exciting news that the Forbidden City is now free for teachers to visit on certain days. The detailed information is as follows. 容易导致重复的开头 Better Example I remember that you’ve mentioned your interest in Chinese culture, especially about its history and architecture. （添加细节– 告知原因） Here is some good news for you. Better Example I have some great news for you! Remember last time you told me how you really wanted to visit the Forbidden City? Now you have a chance to visit for free! (By Cathy) Ending ？ I am looking forward to your reply. I am look forward to receiving your feelings about your visit. I hope this information will help you. 不符合交际性 Better Ending I hope you can enjoy your free trip to the Palace Museum. Wish you a pleasant trip! 免费开放/ 免费进入 be open to teachers free of charge / for free be open free to …… offer free visits for teachers