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读教材,挖语病（I read textbooks, dig） (225200) Jiangsu Province Jiangdu dinggou middle school Zhang Guangxiang Read the textbook, we will deeply dug a lot of obvious mistakes. First, improper word order 1. a dream of Red Mansions in the Ming called Jin Rong said: you are a good boy, you move out of Uncle ming! You are here contains the subjunctive mood, with you are not a little derision meaning, if to you this good boy! Look not quite good. (quibble) Description: with you are not a little sarcastic means expression is not smooth, one point should be placed in the front of you is not change, but also with a little you are not irony on the nature of some. 2...... The errors, omissions, roughness, and later in the literati re creation of the Three Kingdoms have been corrected and polish, rich, in order to obtain a higher artistic achievement. (I in ancient novels and its development law ) Note: the wrong and correct correspondence, but the omission and not finishing touches corresponding rough and not rich correspondence. Right, oversight and rich correspondence, rough and polished correspondence. The original sentence and corresponding content should be changed to insanity:...... The errors, omissions, roughness, and later in the literati re creation of the Three Kingdoms have been corrected, rich and polished, so as to achieve a higher artistic achievement. Two, improper collocation 3. and they began to sink to the bottom and remove fish tricks. (Lotus Lake) Description: the predicate and object in this sentence start improper collocation, not with the noun or noun phrase collocation, for example, we dont say start the movie and began the book. So, in the start behind the should be deleted, plus a verb play or play. 4. by the literature characters thoughts and feelings; the text above there is vague, it is thought not thorough, emotion is not concise. (quibble) Note: the text refers to concise compact concise, and emotion improper collocation, to condense or aggregation. 5